Sunday, May 3, 2009

Life..

Everytime I look into the mirror,
you couldn't find a single error.
the day I don't look the mirror,
you find java.lang.Throwable error.

Everytime I motivated you,
you were filled with bliss.
when I needed motivation,
none was there even to diss.

Everytime you ditched,
I tried to stitch.
but none can go against the treacher life,
even when you are having a wonderful wife.

Everytime I had a dream,
you made me scream.
the louder i screamed,
more closer was I to my dream.
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15 comments:

  1. Arush MittalMay 3, 2009 at 9:24 AM

    nice poem!

    keep penning down ur emotions..! :)
    wishing u a very happy life!
    cheers! ;)

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  2. Aparna (Life Takes)May 3, 2009 at 7:14 PM

    nice poem!

    java.lang error!!??

    r u a software person?...addicted maybe...couldn;t even leave it out of a poem

    but nice poem

    keep writing ~

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  3. AnkitMay 3, 2009 at 7:55 PM

    @Aparna

    spot on :)

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  4. Blank SpaceMay 4, 2009 at 10:58 AM

    nice poem

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  5. Thoughts Over ChaiMay 4, 2009 at 8:16 PM

    hahahhaa...so interesting and thoughtful :D

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  6. Thoughts Over ChaiMay 4, 2009 at 8:16 PM

    hahaha....so interesting and thoughtful :D

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  7. NeoDharmarMay 4, 2009 at 9:26 PM

    I couldn't spot a single flaw in your poem. Shortly said, you've penned down this poem with precision. I'll call it a nice, casual and believable poem. Wish you good luck. :)

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  8. Rahul ChaudharyMay 5, 2009 at 4:54 PM

    Cool...was like a fresh breeze ,hope to have new age khusrau in HInglish in you

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  9. ApyMay 8, 2009 at 9:29 AM

    amazing....just superb...what a thought process.
    good one buddy

    u can check my blog too at http://a-masked-knight.blogspot.com

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  10. AlishahJune 2, 2009 at 1:55 PM

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  11. santJune 24, 2009 at 10:07 PM

    i like your thought you express through your poem

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  12. AlishahJune 25, 2009 at 5:12 PM

    nice.....


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  13. AdishaJune 29, 2009 at 10:19 PM

    Very personal to you :) Nice

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  14. angel from heavenAugust 19, 2009 at 12:47 AM

    well written.

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  15. anandAugust 29, 2009 at 12:39 PM

    are wah! aap to kavi ban gaye..........

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