Sunday, May 3, 2009

Life..

Everytime I look into the mirror,
you couldn't find a single error.
the day I don't look the mirror,
you find java.lang.Throwable error.

Everytime I motivated you,
you were filled with bliss.
when I needed motivation,
none was there even to diss.

Everytime you ditched,
I tried to stitch.
but none can go against the treacher life,
even when you are having a wonderful wife.

Everytime I had a dream,
you made me scream.
the louder i screamed,
more closer was I to my dream.

17 comments:

  1. nice poem!

    keep penning down ur emotions..! :)
    wishing u a very happy life!
    cheers! ;)

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  2. Fantastic entry.

    Boby Thomas
    http://www.bobsindia.com/

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  3. nice poem!

    java.lang error!!??

    r u a software person?...addicted maybe...couldn;t even leave it out of a poem

    but nice poem

    keep writing ~

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  4. hahahhaa...so interesting and thoughtful :D

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  5. hahaha....so interesting and thoughtful :D

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  6. I couldn't spot a single flaw in your poem. Shortly said, you've penned down this poem with precision. I'll call it a nice, casual and believable poem. Wish you good luck. :)

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  7. Cool...was like a fresh breeze ,hope to have new age khusrau in HInglish in you

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  8. amazing....just superb...what a thought process.
    good one buddy

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  10. i like your thought you express through your poem

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  11. nice.....


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  12. Very personal to you :) Nice

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  13. are wah! aap to kavi ban gaye..........

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