Monday, June 29, 2009

Those were the days..

Those were the days when the moon shone
The luminance kissed the surface of river rhone
For now I am as depleted as ozone
Waiting for you to come to my zone

Those were the days when you used to be not around
My life would turn upside down
For in search of factitious crown
Mea-culpa, I made you frown

Those were the days when your one silent glare
Would beacon like magnesium flare
For now I am in dark
Where even mutts don’t bark

Those were the days when your garrulity made me smile
Like the flowers blossoming in the banks of river nile
For now I am missing that seraphic smile
Which culminates my visage to look like a senile

Those were the days when we used to debate
And I remember how everytime you made me wait
For now my tears has inundate
Oozed to the level to importunate

11 comments:

  1. this is what i call a simple poem with beauty all over it..

    i love these lines..
    Those were the days when your garrulity made me smile
    Like the flowers blossoming in the banks of river nile

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  2. Sooooooooooooooooo Beautiful!
    very well done!
    I have a poem too but not beautiful like yours.
    http://wisdom-follower.blogspot.com/2009/06/together-we-have-much-more-power-like.html
    You are very smart.
    I've added you to my link list.

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  3. Cool! I'm not much of a poetry person, but I like this.

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  4. hello... hapi blogging... have a nice day! just visiting here....

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  5. its kinda sad but its really nice. Reminiscing those days of the past. Nice poem. huh. a feel a bit sad. I can relate.

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  6. Rhythmic, sad. Speaks to me a lost love; but I love the feel the music of the lines.

    Depleted ozone...specifically like that.

    Can't write poetry myself, but I do enjoy it.

    Good luck in your future writings.

    Sandy
    welcome mats out, hope you'll swing by for a visit.

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