Sunday, May 3, 2009

Life..

Everytime I look into the mirror,
you couldn't find a single error.
the day I don't look the mirror,
you find java.lang.Throwable error.

Everytime I motivated you,
you were filled with bliss.
when I needed motivation,
none was there even to diss.

Everytime you ditched,
I tried to stitch.
but none can go against the treacher life,
even when you are having a wonderful wife.

Everytime I had a dream,
you made me scream.
the louder i screamed,
more closer was I to my dream.

17 comments:

Arush Mittal said...

nice poem!

keep penning down ur emotions..! :)
wishing u a very happy life!
cheers! ;)

Boby Thomas said...

Fantastic entry.

Boby Thomas
http://www.bobsindia.com/

Aparna said...

nice poem!

java.lang error!!??

r u a software person?...addicted maybe...couldn;t even leave it out of a poem

but nice poem

keep writing ~

Ankit said...

@Aparna

spot on :)

Shruti Sharma said...

nice poem

Tasneem N. said...

hahahhaa...so interesting and thoughtful :D

Tasneem N. said...

hahaha....so interesting and thoughtful :D

Gopalakrishnan said...

I couldn't spot a single flaw in your poem. Shortly said, you've penned down this poem with precision. I'll call it a nice, casual and believable poem. Wish you good luck. :)

Rahul Chaudhary said...

Cool...was like a fresh breeze ,hope to have new age khusrau in HInglish in you

Apy said...

amazing....just superb...what a thought process.
good one buddy

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Anu said...

Very nice

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sant said...

i like your thought you express through your poem

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Adisha said...

Very personal to you :) Nice

angel from heaven said...

well written.

anand said...

are wah! aap to kavi ban gaye..........

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